托福评分标准作文

托福独立写作试题部分需30分钟的时间，需要考生根据自己的'知识和经验陈述、解释并支持对待某一问题的某个看法。下面是小编分享的托福作文评分标准，希望能帮到大家!

　托福作文评分标准1：well organized and well developed 逻辑条理清楚，发展充分。

托福作文评分标准2：uses specific details and examples to support you view 考生的论据一定要具体、明确，且对论点有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。

　　托福作文评分标准3：effectively addresses the writing topic and task. 要求考生有效地阐明主题，考生千万不要跑题。考生全部跑题现象较少，但是局部跑题现象十分严重，这也是考生不 能轻取高分的缘故。

　　托福作文评分标准4：displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom.(通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度)这一点是各位考生经常忽视， 迷惘和不清楚的一点。托福作文占总分120分的30分。要求在作文上花的时间既要少又要拿高分，至少28分。凡是想拿到28分甚至满分以上的同学一定要注意此项评分标准。能用first千万不要用firstly，能用finally千万不要用last but not least. 不少同学花了很多功夫背这一外国人都不用的词组，能用常用的词千万不要用偏词，同时我们要熟练掌握5大语法结构和2种从句。

　　托福作文范文

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Two people can become good friends even if one of them has more money than the other.

Generally, I disagree with statements that two persons cannot be friends if one is richer than the other. From many TV plays and movies, we always can see that after long time of crucifixion, a poor boy and a rich girl eventually become friends. However, these fairy-tale stories only have chance to appear in fairy tale. In the reality , this will never happen because rich people and poor people have different goals of lives and different life styles.

To begin with, poor people and rich people have different goals of living. Even from the beginning of their lives, they undertake the different missions. Since poor people were born, their goal of living has never changed, which is leading a decent life, such as buying a spacious apartment, a nice car and having a happy family . However, rich people’ s goal of living is to continue their parents’ business. For example, poor people will talk about housing loan, but when rich people sit together, they will talk about buying which building just taken shape. So we can imagine when rich people and poor people discuss the houses, it is self-defeating for rich people and embarrassing for poor people.

Secondly, rich people and poor people have different ways of living. On this point, poor people will definitely repel rich people because poor people feel less confident. For example, when they finish their jobs, what poor people only can do every day is to go back homes and stay with their families, while rich people can have different choices to relax themselves. For instance, rich people can go to the golf courts to enjoy the fresh air and indulge themselves into pleasure of getting closer to the nature. Poor people can only sit in front of TV to see the soap operas.

Admittedly, exceptions do exist in some special aspects. Basketball player serve as good examples. In NBA, about 50 percent of players were born in slums. However, when they finally own tons of money, they still are contacting with their friends who were not rich at all. Allen Iverson is a NBA player, but he always holds the parties with his friends in slums.

All in all, in most cases, people with huge difference in their economic conditions cannot be friends.