托福真题作文范文《大学校园建设与招聘好老师》

对于大学校园的建设现在社会上有不同的意见，有的人认为应该加强校园建设，有的人认为应该招聘好老师，你怎么看?下面是小编整理的一篇托福真题作文范文，供大家参考。

Do you agree or disagree: the universities should spend more money in improving facilities (libraries, computer labs) than hiring famous teachers.

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Cradles of cultivating talents, universities are supposed to provide most high-caliber education. Responding to the expectation, universities have to think the issue over. Compared with hiring more teachers, from my own perspective, keeping facilities and resources in the universities most advanced and updated is more essential not only for students but also for renowned professors.

First of all, students are able to enjoy a better study environment if their schools utilize advanced equipment. With the assistance of exquisite inventions such as electronic screen and projectors, as well as laboratory equipment, like microscopes and chemical reactors, studying would no longer be a tedious and repetitious information engrafting process, but a way everyone would like to get involved in. Similarly, definitions and formulas of physics and chemistry will graven in students’ minds deeply if they are aided by the equipment when experimenting. However, hardly can professors crystalize abstract concepts into definite ideas without advanced teaching devices.

What is more, as for famous teachers themselves, a university that does not invest in its facilities would be appealing. To be constantly enthusiastic on researching their respective academic fields, teachers have a great demand for exquisite facilities to maintain progressing on their own fields. The most sophisticated technological devices offered in universities enable these teachers to conduct successful researches and remain at the top, which is really attractive to those renowned professors. By contrast, old and obsolete teaching and studying facilities will certainly not inspire teachers to keep further academic researching. Also, practically impossible will teachers have interest in making progress.

Granted, it is conceded that hiring more teachers in universities means guaranteeing education quality in some sense because every student will be concerned and cared about. Even slightest and most subtle academic performance changes of students will be noticed; therefore, teachers can encourage and guide frustrated and upsetting students in time. However, while weighing the benefits brought by investing in facilities and hiring more teachers, we can conclude that facilities are more worthwhile.

In conclusion, I should reiterate that universities should update their facilities, making a top priority. Without advanced facilities, a university will not be helped further improved.

　附：托福综合写作一般技巧

1.短文阅读还是听力中讲演部分都必须要做笔记。

2.短文与讲演虽然是同一主题，但内容一定有所不同，甚至观点相左。

3.作文中总结短文和讲演的`观点时，不要仅仅把所看到的和所听到的简单地复制。而是尽可能地使用自身语言来表达，比如使用同义词，改变句子结构等。这样不但可以显示对短文和讲演的理解程度，而且也展现应用英文的能力。

4.尽量完整地总结出短文和讲演中的主要信息，并进行综合。如有必要，还要将短文和讲演中的不同观点进行比较。

5. 除非专门要求，不要发表自己的观点，只是进行客观的总结。这一点与**型的作文恰恰相反。