2015商务英语BEC高级写作范文（精选）

　　【参考范文】

Report writing Ex 4: Sample answer: (235words)

Reassessment of job satisfaction: SuePearson(PR Dept.)

Introduction

This report sets out to use Workset colours toassess the accuracy of my job description as PRofficer and to suggest a number of changes.

Findings

It is clear that there is a difference between theway the company views the job and the reality as I perceive it. Firstly, a number of areas whichdemand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief. Thesegment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector; this relatesto my attendance at a number of meetings which I can contribute little. Another significantarea is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time I spend sorting out computerproblems. I feel these activities are hampering my core work. As can be seen from the piecharts, the time I spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is lessthan envisaged.

Conclusions

The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.

Recommendations

I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart andto investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suitedto these tasks.

　　【参考译文】

报告写作前4:样品回答:(235字)

工作满意度的评估:SuePearson(公关部门。)

介绍

这份报告提出了使用Workset颜色评估我的工作描述的准确性程度PRofficer和建议的变化。

发现

很明显,一定是有区别的,该公司认为工作和现实是我感知它。首先,许多领域whichdemand很大一部分的时间并没有提及的正式工作。Thesegment在饼图提供行业最引起关注的是粉红色;这relatesto我出席的.会议我可以贡献小。另一个significantarea是灰色的部分,这是指计划外的时间我花computerproblems排序。我觉得这些活动是阻碍我的核心工作。从piechart可以看到,我花的时间积极努力达成目标,和我的部门经理是小于设想。

结论

上述差异明显表明,短暂的我现在的工作是不准确的。

建议

我建议我的正式工作短暂使用Workset颜色应该更新。这也将是有价值的考虑非核心颜色的比例饼图和调查工作是否在这些领域可以由别人更suitedto这些任务。