2016年3月大学英语六级作文参考作文
【范文一】
The recent decades has witnessed the remarkable development of information technology, which indicates we have entered an era of information. However, here arises an issue about how to dive into oceans of information and acquire the useful one.
It is widely acknowledged that advanced information technology just provides us with a platform to search and share news, messages and our life experience. The source, truth and value of those information, however, are always unrevealed. Besides, those who master advanced technology are usually slaving for filtering, estimating and combining those fragmented information they have found, which further contributes to the difficulty of acquiring useful information. Just imagine we will host a conference about climate crisis and use a famous search-engine to look for something needed in the meeting introduction. Can you quickly and accurately acquire what you want?
To reverse this situation, government and technology firms should set up a more valid sources of knowledge while individuals need to define more detailed content to make the search more accurate. So important is their working hand in hand to make useful information no longer unrevealed.
点评:
题干中明确需要focus on the difficulty in acquiring useful information in spite of advanced information technology,所以这篇文章同学们重点应该放在difficulty上。
范文中,开篇由一句时间状语作主语引入到现象,并且用转折提出主题词useful information。文章中间段重点全部放在了寻找有用信息的difficulty上。运用并列的逻辑关系将题干中提到的information technology以及关于个人在信息使用上的问题并列到一起。段落收尾是以一个设想加提问,用以引出第三段针对有效信息获取困难提出的建议。
最后一段使用建议的`手法,针对第二段所提出的difficulty的两方面——科技公司和个人提出建议。最后使用一句倒装句(So大写倒装)再次强调解决问题重要性来对文章做总结。最后一段的目的在于使得文章从单纯的列举误导信息的危害加入了作者自己对这一现象的思考,也让文章的内容更加完整。
【范文二】
It is true that the internet has brought us great convenience and efficiency, however, as the data grows at an exponential rate, the severity of misleading information arises.
Deceptive news or tips travel fast online, and worse still, they may shadow our routine life or even hinder the progress of our society. Lack of enough consideration, we are easily misled by false information which always appears in bulk on the webpage. Some will alter their plans to deal with the so-called disaster but only affect their normal life; a few may even go further to violate social security and economic trend. Moreover, if the misleading news isn’t corrected soon, there may be a trust crisis between individuals and the government. For example, the nuclear leakage in Japan in 2011 has caused great panic in Eastern China, where thousands of people went out to rob salt after the rumor that salt can prevent radiation, and ended in a turbulence in the domestic market.
To prevent misleading information spreading, government should set up laws to regulate online news while individuals need to judge independently. Only when they work hand in hand will the harm of false information be diminished to the end.
点评:
题干中明确标出同学们需要focus on the harm caused by misleading information online,所以同学们这篇文章重点就应该放在harm危害这个词上面。
范文中,开篇以社会现象引入到主题词misleading information误导信息的出现;之后第二段开始重点讨论误导信息的严重危害。内容层层递进,从谣言使一些人做出冲动行为,推进到若不治理将会产生对于政府信任危机。并且段落最后用日本核辐射导致国内抢盐事件的举例进一步证明了谣言的危害。中间段紧扣主题。
文章结尾部分采用建议式的结尾方式,提出了针对之前提出的危害的解决措施,从政府到个人都有对应的建议。这也更加紧扣之前第二段所提到的内容。最后一句运用押韵的手法(hand in hand对应to the end)将文章带入收尾。最后一段的目的在于使得文章从单纯的列举误导信息的危害加入了作者自己对这一现象的思考,也让文章的内容更加完整。
【范文三】
The picture describes a conversation between two people,one of them said: “I readabout 3 hours a favorite book is Facebook.”The picture intends to inform us that the Internet has exerted an important influence on reading for the modern citizens。
The phenomenon involves many factors,which can be listed as the follows. To begin with,with the rapid development of scientific technology. The Internet has become indispensable in our daily ubtedly,it provides people with many advantages and makes our life morecomfortable and efficient, including the way of reading. What's more,it is a moreadvanced way to get information needed by people,and an efficient way to search for materials.“I have hardly ever bought any books since 2003. I have been reading online in recent years.”said professor Wang from Peking University.“With the click of the mouse,any stories or information that I want at any given time or place,is there.”she may well explain why so many people now prefer to embrace the wonders of the Internet than read print copies of book or any other reading material。
Every coin hastwo sides,reading in social networking websites is no exception. Admittedly,there is false and useless information on the social networking websites, it is advisable that we read more critically and carefully。
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