精彩的焰火大学英语作文
the week long national day holiday which started from oct. i has become not only an occasion for celebrating the birth of the nation but also a time for people to rela. after all, under great pressure every day, everyone longs to slow down and rediscover the real fun of life.
my only hope for the week long holiday was also to rela myself well, instead of playing well. i slept until the sun was shinning above, ate my favorite food which i scarcely have because of their high calorie, and enjoyed different kinds of films from day to night.
usually, i seldom went out during the holidays, as it was too terrible to battle the national day holiday crowds. but this time, i couldn't resist myself against the performance of music fireworks whose theme was "all colors of music".
as a part of the international music fireworks festival, the performance of music fireworks, designed by the swedish artists, was staged at century park in pudong on the night of october 3.
the scene, a spectacular combination of fireworks eploding in harmony with the music, made powerful visual and audio impact on me. the artists selected for the performance various pieces of music, including classical music by beethoven and strauss, some representative popular compositions such as "my heart will go on". with the music, the fireworks were set off in different formations. i could admire the fireworks in the sky as well as their reflections in the water.
arising from the river surface to the height of 300 meters in the sky, multi-layered and rich colored fireworks formulated an etremely spectacular picture. one of the most eye catchers was that nearly 1000 sparkling pieces of fireworks along the surface of the water formed a red carpet with 80 meters long and 250 meters wide. at the same time, a 10 meter-high waterfall firework rushed downwards the bridge across jingtian lake and simultaneously the red lantern shaped fireworks filled the sky. it really took me on a romantic tour as the fireworks eplode.
wish for net chance to see such kind of music fireworks again!
简 评
这是一篇记叙文。记叙文的写作,首先当然要注意时间顺序,这一点容易做到。不容易做到的是详略得当、主次分明、中心突出。而这正是这篇文章做得比较好的地方。国庆是欢乐的时候、休闲的时候、放松的时候。这位同学写国庆没有面面俱到,而是选取其中印象最深的音乐焰火来写,将其中焰火燃放的场面写得比较详细。看过烟火的`人都知道,这种场面看起来壮观精彩,写起来却很不容易。一是同学熟悉议论文的写作,场面描写却是软肋;二是这种壮观的场面太难以捉摸了。这篇文章在这一块着墨不多,描写也难说精彩,但总算是一个良好的开始。
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