2015年10月10日雅思大作文范文

Some people think to prevent illness and disease, government should focus

more on environmental pollution and housing.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　【Introduction】

There is no doubt that environmental pollution and terrible housing

conditions contribute to poor health and lead to greater instances of sickness.

Nevertheless, government has an essential role to play in the eradication of

disease and ought to focus on improving the lives of their citizens.

　　【Body】

With regards to keeping the atmosphere clean, officials ought to decrease

the number of vehicles on the roads to reduce environmental pollution caused by

the discharge of contaminants. In terms of an industrial setting, authorities

must place reasonable restrictions on factory output in order to cleanse the air

and decrease atmospheric contamination. In the event that corporations fail to

adhere to these established regulations, they should be heavily penalized to

discourage this behaviour.

Housing plays a significant role in the well-being of citizens as they

spend most of their time in their living spaces. The addition of simple

facilities could increase the quality of housing including air conditioners and

heaters to regulate temperature to prevent catching a cold or sinks and showers

to wash away dirt. The materials used in the construction process may cause

asbestos poisoning or deteriorating conditions are associated with exposure to

lead, mold, dust mites and rodents. Furthermore, the prices of accommodation,

especially in large cities is extraordinarily costly, forcing employees to work

overtime and extra hours in order to afford housing.

　　【Conclusion】

Placing an emphasis on fixing these environmental and housing issues will

have a positive effect on members of society. It will lead to preventing the

spread of disease and slowly develop a higher standard of living for citizens,

which ought to be the goal of any government entity.