雅思饼图小作文范文《服务问卷》

饼图作文也是雅思考生会遇到的，但是考生往往难以写好这一类的作文。下面，小编就为大家送上一篇雅思饼图小作文范文，供大家参考。

　话题：

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

　范文

The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.

It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.

Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.

With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.

附：雅思饼图小作文怎么写?

1、选择最重要的一个点放在第一个写

从范文中可以看出，换工作，找工作和读书是作者首先提到的，因为这是选择搬家的'主要原因。被囊括在其他里的是不那么重要的原因或者只是一小部分人群，所以他们可以被放在结尾再写

2、让句子容易被理解

在写小作文的时候，应该尽可能将信息串在一条逻辑线路上，使文章更容易理解。

在饼状图中，最能体现逻辑的就是进行对比，将文章重心放在描述两张图的相似点和不同点上，而不是将他们分开描述。

如果分别描述图表，阅读的人就需要不断的在两张图之间切换，自己去发现两张图的不同点在哪里。可以看到在范文里面，作者并没有这样做。

3、语言要丰富

在任何小作文中，这点都是很重要的，考生不应该不断的重复同一种结构。写饼状图时最重要的句子就是描述比例的那几句。

通常考生都会用 "the proportion of..."or "the percentage of..."