托福写作满分作文三要素分析

本文为大家带来托福写作满分作文特点分析，其实对于托福作文来说，我们首先要知道的是托福写作满分作文的标配有哪些?从OG中我们可以看出，托福写作满分作文的3个标配内容：文章结构、文章内容和语言。下面yjbys网小编也将主要针对这三点做详细分析。

　一、文章结构

一般从体裁上划分，独立写作我们都会写成议论文，在议论文当中论点、理由、论据、结论和论证是5大关键要素，任何一篇议论文都离不开这5个方面。具体来说就是论点是文章的核心，理由是论点成立的依据，二者构成因果的关系;论据是对理由的具体解释，一般都是事例;结论是对论点的重申，二者很有关联，头尾呼应;而论证部分始终贯穿整个文章。如果你的托福作文想要得到高分，那么这5个要素就必须面面俱到，也只有这样才能写出结构严谨、条理清晰的高分作文。特点要注意的是，在这里建议大家，在你的文章中除了这5要素之外，考生还应该在论点前做一些简单的背景介绍，一般2-3句就可以了，目的就是为了论点造势，让文章看起来有层次。

　　二、文章内容

文章内容就是为了让你的论点更加的明了和细化，一般都是以例子的形式出现在文章的段落当中。为了论证观点，有时需要从几个方面来进行阐述，这样每个方面都形成一个分论点，这论证起来更有说服力。

举例例子，以饮食为主题，我们可以举例说以前食品由政府进行分配，数量是有限制的，人们不能随心所欲的买到自己需要的食品;而现在与之前则大不一样，现在有超市，人们可以买到任何你想要的食品。这样新旧的对比，更加的鲜明的表现出现代社会物资一、人们的选择权大大的.增加，从而可以推断出人们的生活越来越好、便捷、合适，从面证论点。这样呈鲜明对比的例子就会让读者耳目一新，很容易就会给你高分的。

三、语言

在托福写作中，如果一篇作文的语法正确、用词恰当，并能准确的达意，那么得高分的机率就会大许多。纵观各种满分作文，我们可以总结出任何一篇高分作文都建议在语言的基础上的。当然在这个基础上考生可以追求更多样、高级的表达，使得你的文章更加的丰富。

在语言的优化上是需要考生不断的积累和练习的，前面提到的机经刷题和TPO刷题都是很不错，只有通过自己多记多练，不断扩充自己的语料库，你才能写出越来越漂亮的作文。

　拓展阅读：托福写作优秀材料：熊猫保护

　　新托福写作素材：熊猫保护

The Giant Panda Protection and Research Center of China was established in the early 1990s to keep giant pandas in existence. The center, collaborated with the central government and many world’s leading wildlife conservation organizations, has spared no efforts in expanding panda reserves, improving panda breeding management, and conducting scientific research on wildness training and the reintroduction of captive-bred giant pandas. Simultaneously, strict laws against panda poaching and fur smuggling have been stipulated when the public is well equipped with the knowledge disseminated by the center as well as increasingly aware of the importance of animal protection. All these measures are so effective that panda population has multiplied to 170 in China, which accounts for 60% of the total number of the captive-bred pandas worldwide.

　　- 托福写作素材Words and Phrases -

① collaborate with 与…合作

=work with, cooperate with

* collaborate with one’s colleagues

* extensively collaborate/cooperate with neighboring countries

② spare no efforts in 不遗余力做某事

=take measures to

* spare no efforts in safeguarding people’s health

* take measures to protect the increasingly deteriorating environment

③ stipulate 规定

=prescribe, regulate

* the government/law stipulates that…

* It is stipulated/regulated by the government/law that…

④ account for (在数量/比重上)…占

=constitute

Education expenditure accounted for/constituted five per cent of the gross national product (GNP) last year.

- Sentence Patterns -

① so…that… 太…以致…

　结果状语从句

* The plot of Murder on the Orient Express is so thought-provoking that viewers are turned into detectives themselves.

* Many students are so preoccupied with their studies that they do not have time to cook a nutritious meal.