2015年GMAT作文机经汇总
GMAT考试不仅考查申请人的语言能力和数学能力,还要测试其头脑反应、逻辑思维和解决实际问题的能力。一般来说,GMAT考试可以比较真实地反映应试者的英语水平,因而受到越来越多的专业和学校的重视和好评。下面是yjbys网小编提供给大家关于2015年GMAT作文机经汇总,希望对大家有所帮助。
篇一:航空公司减少航线
本月原始
某airline company(P打头),某报告说过去一年原油价格上涨,而P公司呢他们还expand its operation(新开了一些航线),P公司经理了profit的decline,通过我们的分析,发现原油价格上涨对行业影响是普遍的,而某些公司却报告了盈利增加,对比P公司和盈利增加的公司,唯一的区别就是P新开了航线,因此,新开航线影响了P公司的盈利,如果要提升利润,我们recommend remove掉去年新开的航线
考古
V1. 说一个航空公司的去年profit下降了,然后说因为两个原因:1.去年油价上升了。2.去年增加了一些飞机。但是呢,别个航空公司都面临油价上升,但profit增加了,所以导致该航空公司profit下降的原因一定就是飞机的数量增加了。所以为了今年要增加profit,就减少飞机数量。
V2. 一个航空公司分析师给 ceo 的 email。说 Provincia last year profits decline,oil price 正好增长,所以该公司的 expenditure for fuel 增加了,同时该公司去年 add more flights 因为其他 airlines 也经历了油价上涨,但是甚至 increase profit 所以 P 公司亏损的`原因一定是 more flights。为了利润,应该 eliminate flighs
V3.作文是email.一个航空公司的利润fell over 20%说的是航油价上涨和新买5架飞机导致的,since航油大家(airline)都在涨,所以两个原因中一定有一个是利润下降的原因,那就是买飞机导致利润下降
参考思路:
1. 充分必要条件:flight expansion 是 profit 减少的唯一条件?也有可能是乘客减少,
2. 错误类比:其他公司 increase their profitability 不一定就是减少number of flight,也许是他们的服务更好,顾客更喜欢选择他们公司;或是
3. 无根据假设:Decrease flight expansion一定会使 profit上升?虽然减少航班数量,可以减少overall cost,但是 revenue from these flights 也是同样减少。
篇二:Park Hill商业计划
本月原始
就是在park hill区的披萨店、电影院和高尔夫俱乐部过去两年发展很好,所以XX公司今年应该投资另外一个区的另外三家店,并且采取消费两家店可以获得第三家折扣的措施,可以让每个店都获利并且最大化回报
考古原题
The following appeared as part of the business plan of the Capital Idea investment firm:
"Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had business increases over the past two years. Capital Idea should therefore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o'-Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district. As a condition, we should require them to participate in a special program: Any customer who patronizes two of the businesses will receive a substantial discount at the third. By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each and maximize our return."
参考思路
1. 错误类比:PH地区与I地区不同,在PH地区成功的business在I地区不一定成功,人口,habit等不同。
2. 因果关系:即使这三种business会成功,那么这特定的三家店也不一定能成功,还要看该店的经营、销售、服务等等。
3. 无根据假设:即使捆绑三个店,顾客也不一定会每个店都去消费。
it除了与销售量有关,与成本也有关,不能单纯因为去的人可能增加就认为profit会增加,还要考虑成本、折扣等等。
参考范文
The argument states that if by motivating customers to patronize all three Businesses of Capital Investment, the profitability of each business will increase and maximize return for Capital achieve this the firm proposes to initiate a program where if a customer patronizes two of the Businesses , he will receive substantial discount on the third. However there are several assumptions that the argument is based on for which it does not give sufficient evidence.
Firstly, The argument assumes that people will not otherwise go to all the three places if they go to the two places. There is no evidence to support this assumption. For example, certain demographic groups may enjoy watching theatre, playing golf and may like to eat out as well frequently. They may not select two out of the three. So by giving them heavy discount on something that they would have anyways chosen may actually negatively impact the profits.
Secondly, the argument gives the example of the success of the three businesses in the Park Hall district. However it does not clearly state the reasons behind the success of the businesses there. It appears that Capital Idea selected these businesses to invest specifically for the unique combination which they found to be successful in Park Hill district. If this is the case then the three businesses are complementary to one another and hence they will succeed as a group. So there seems no reason to explicitly ask customer to patronize the three at the cost of a discount.
In conclusion the argument is flawed for the above mentioned reasons. It can be strengthened if more evidence is given to substantiate why the proposed program would work. Without these the argument remains unconvincing and open to debate.
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