考研英语写作真题分析
uppose you won a translation contest and your friend Jack wrote an email to congratulate you, and ask advice on translation. Write him a reply to
1)thank him;
2)give your advice.
You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. Do not write the address .(10 point)
如大家所见,这是2016年英语二小作文题目。英语(二)考纲的写作部分,其实主要考查学生的应用能力,考查范围包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等,还应能写一般描述性、叙述性和说明或议论性的文章;而要求考生根据所给情景写出一篇约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文。
作为写作B部分的小作文总分10分,大家要抓住得分点。小作文在评分时有如下评分要点:1.信息点——覆盖全面;2.内容——组织连贯;3.语言——准确性;4.格式——符合要求;5.语域——恰当。
不出所料,今年英语二的小作文再次考查了书信体,并且考查的信件可以说是杂糅型的。这在2011年英语二中出现了同样的考查方式:
Suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admited to a university write him/her a letter to:
(1)Congratulate him/her,and
(2)give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter,Use zhangwei.
同样的考查方式,足以说明一件事情——绝对要重视考研真题。我们总在强调真题的重要性,希望大家以后一定要强化这种认识。
下面我们来详细解读下今年的小作文,首先看一下题目要求:
称呼:Dear Jack注意称呼中,后面的逗号不可丢,也不能写成冒号。
正文
建议大家三步走策略——简洁、直接、明了:写作目的、写作是由、重申目的.
第一段:写作内容需涵盖两点:写信目的,表明感谢来自朋友的祝贺;可以采用这样的表达方式:I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.
第二段:写作内容应以建议为主体。在这个过程中可以把日常我们如何提高的方式写进正文,如讲究学习方式、注重坚持、多多接触外文文化及语境。那本篇老师主要从前两个方面进行论述,表达如下:As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. At the top of list is the persistence due to the fact that you could deserve the position after days or years of efforts that you have had in the field. What’s more, you are supposed to pay more attention to the way in which you finish your major, for it plays a significant role in the process.
第三段:再次强调重申写信目的,如Thanks again and I do hope that my suggestions can be in favor of your future study.
落款:Yours sincerely,特别提醒sincerely后面逗号不能丢;签名:Li Ming特别注意Ming后面一定不能出现句点。
整体成文如下:
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.
As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. At the top of list is the persistence due to the fact that you could deserve the position after days or years of efforts that you have had in the field. What’s more, you are supposed to pay more attention to the way in which you finish your major, for it plays a significant role in the process.
Thanks again and I do hope that my suggestions can be in favor of your future study.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
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